Everyone has got a place
But I have got nowhere to stay
Ain't no target not a goal
sit and watch my soul to fade

唔……英文好像不適合用中國古詩「第三句不押韻」這樣的做法 (A-A-B-A)。
好像 A-A-B-B 會比較通順一點……

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  1. Ain’t no target nor a goal
    只不過在學校喝了杯7-11買的包裝奶茶,又睡不著了 XDDDD

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